Feedback.. :)

1. Crawling - doesn't work?
2. Purpose for walking through the door? What are we considering? Myself in that event.
3. The moment needs to break - but not crawling - maybe being sucked out.
4. What are we thinking about? A particular layer of the body? Add a layer of texture.
5. First corner section feels too quick. Improvisation has lost its reality in rehearsing. Contact has to feel real. 
6. Don't readjust when lying down - think of head on belly - don't worry about lying on your back - feels & looks too unnatural.
7. Whole hands on the floor.
8. Diagonal - moments when it feels too practised - slow it down. Frame the beautiful moments - give it space to breathe.
9. Texture / reasons for river. More layers of sediment.
10. Run backward in river needs to be a run!! That moment needs to be marked - a pause. Give it a breath.
11. Making too much preparation for the lifts. Don't wait for it. Timing.
12. Tension in the hands generally. 

I really appreciate the feedback Katye gives us. I think she has a way of putting things that really makes me question what we're doing. This has helped me add texture to my dancing; I feel I need to find a purpose for my moving.

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